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its a start., ^_^

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Dec 10th 2003#132613 Report
Member since: Sep 7th 2002
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Dec 10th 2003#132617 Report
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I like it. What library?
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Dec 10th 2003#132619 Report
Member since: Jul 10th 2002
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Really, its not at all bad. In fact, it's pretty good.

I would freaking love to see you "lead" the type on the letterhead to at least 20pts. Then get it spaced off the logo a bit more. I think it would look teriffic running down the page more. Its a bit too tight right now. The logo itself is pretty damn nice as well. The "wave" is inconsistant on where it ends on the different items, but thats minor. I think you just need to work on the information text and you got yourself a nice corporate package.

If you can send me a jpeg of the letterhead, I can show you exactly what I am thinking about.
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Dec 10th 2003#132634 Report
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yeah, I'm having a hardtime figuring out how to layout the text block, I'll email you the file to have a look. Yeah I just printed it and I had to bump the type up to 10pt and what not.

Cheers,
Michael
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Dec 10th 2003#132708 Report
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well, was shot down in class, back to the drawing board.
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Dec 10th 2003#132714 Report
Member since: Jul 19th 2003
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how come?? spectra is right about the leading!! if he means in the library text....

ooh look at me. i learnt about text and fonts yesterday

haha
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Dec 10th 2003#132729 Report
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well, I did all the leading space, but she didnt like my logo because it was to literal, and the whooshes she hated.

cheers,
Michael
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Dec 10th 2003#132733 Report
Member since: May 27th 2002
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Bah, stupid woman. It rocks. Hang on to that one.
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Dec 11th 2003#132747 Report
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Tell the lady she friggin sucks, it is sweet work man.
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Dec 11th 2003#132761 Report
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the logo looks very similiar to the actual space needle logo, which could be good and bad at the same time http://www.hadw.com/images/portfolio/portfolioData/SN_01_l.jpg
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