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Why is everything so cramped? Do you have some sort of restriction that all your elements need to hug each others edges? Space some of that stuff out. Give the eyes some breathing room. This would look much much better if you gave a bit of space to everything.

Also, I hope this is all done in a vector program. If it isn't, start over. Regardless of the budget, you are doing more harm then good by doing it in Photoshop.

illustrator ;)

looks very good, i like the concept.

There are only 2 things that bothers me.

*The picture in the book looks like the restaurant in Las Vegas, the rotating restaurant you know.

*The secound thing in that the book is twisted but the "restaurant" ;) isn´t.


other than that it´s good, goodluck m8.

The simple concept works, however, the book does not. Work on it (maybe add page lines) and make it look more like a book. You are on your way, though.

Does the restraunt look like the space needle?

We did the nametags for South Seattle Community College... Do you know them?

I would....

1. type the SCCC on a path, so it curves along the top of the book.

2. Enlarge the SCCC so it pokes out the top of your circle.

3. Add a couple variable stroke outlines to the SCCC.

4. Call it good. Like you said, they have a budget, don't spend more than they do on it.

Nice work.
Graphicsguy

I would put the text in the book on the left side with the needle on the right...