check my new closed website splash

hi there. please tell me what you think of my little pixel-vector-text-mixture... thank you.

click the splash

hey, i love it! except for the white pixelated lines.

yeah little grunge and white trash feeling, great work

I really like it exept those black and grey thick thingies...
And the thicker white doodle I would take away too...
But I still like it :D

I would keep the pixelated 'paint' lines. They add character and give the void created by the darker colour body and substance. It also fits in with the current trend (not in a whoreish way) of including hand-drawn or scanned elements into a composition.

I would take out the lines because they look retarded.

The hwole thing seems too random, it doesn't have a point..

Originally posted by supahsekzy
The hwole thing seems too random, it doesn't have a point..

well, not everything has to have a forward point.. ??
A splash is, mostly, simply a little eyecandy while waiting for the site to load.. (thats my idea of a splash of course)

i like it though... not to fund of the jagged lines, but thoose things have been mentioned..


edit * oh, and i dont hope you want the grey text to be readable ;)

That's a good point.. when i said it doesn't have a point, i meant it was a bunch of random things, none of which are really working towards a common goal, y'know? Just random for the sake of being random.

oh,well .. good point