New - light, shadowing thingy...

...Hmm...I keep trying, you can't say anything else ;)

Here's something I played with in order to see if I could do some artificial lightning -> Now, crit on the shadow and lightning, if you please...

mmm, not sure on the gold bars, to my eyes they seem, well a bit out of place, like they dont belong in the picture, ya know what i mean....the lighting, is great

better than the last one - but the gold bars have an underglow that is a bit unsettling - makes them look jagged - otherwise good

Looks clean.

Try adding a little noise to the spotlight with a soft reflective gradient for some added realism.

Regards
Fess

The bottom of the bars have some jaggies that need to be removed.

But good job overall. It would be nice if we could see where the light was coming from (e.g. a lamp) too.

Gee, thanks guys...It warms my heart to hear that you think it's better than before. It means I do something right, practisewise...

The goldbarthingy wasn't the issue, tho it's hard not to comment, eh ? That was only a cube thing I changed perstpective on in order to have something fast to work with...Do not bother with that shiez ;)

I do suck in all your comments for improvement purposes ;)

Thx - Patric

Originally posted by Patteman
I do suck in all your comments for improvement purposes ;)

oh man - why do you tempt me so? It's all I can do to keep from saying something that includes "...suck on this..."

somehow the shadow is wrong.. you see, the goldbars would individually cast a news shadow, which should be seen on the next one ..

but its way better indeed..

and ROFL mihai .. that disgusting .. but tempting, yes ..

(NO!)

¨^¨



edit] * What im trying to say about the shadow is, you need to do more work on it, not just a layer thats grouped into the goldbar layer with a big bad black brush ;)

It's all I can do to keep from saying something that includes "...suck on this..."

The only way to end temptation is to give in to it...