wallpaper from new poster

hi,ive been lurking for awhile and decided to throw up a some wallpapers and see what you guys think.this is one i did of model,actress(LOL) Gauge.C&C please

http://www.geocities.com/festevil99/gaugewp.txt

fixed the link sorry bout that

first.....edit your post to say "adult pic" (or a mod will do it sooner or later)

2nd.....i dont like the outlines around her. I think it might look better if she was over some swirly stuff (like what you have on the left). Also maybe color her thong a little more so it matches the rest of the purple.

this thing is huge. . . in actual size and kb's, hmmmm

anyway bak to the crit . . . .

its ok good colour n lasso on the hair, unless it was that color anyway, the wavy lines dont do anything for me, they get on my nerves, if i used that as a bg i would get sick of all the white, maybe thats just me, and those lines, i suppose it would be better if there were less of them . . . and they also seem a tad pixelated maybe thats just the blur you've put on,

the black under the thong just ruins her ass. . . i meen y the hell is there a black shape? any particular reason ?

oh and one more thing that "simple" thing. . . pixelated and and bevel has got to go,

needs work but im not saying its bad im just tweaking out the parts i dont like,

regards

> Mikey <

i think theyre meant to be trousers mate

but it looks like theyve been brushed on as there is a little indent into their outline by her left haand

the black is her dress or pants or some other type of clothing.i dont really like it either,i shoulda done somethin with it.

oh, she has grey skin! good god that turns me on! u'd know why if u've seen my site.
as for the design, i think it's a 4 out of 10.

I can't view it, it's extension is .txt, does that have anything to do with it? I am using Firebird 0.7