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is pennsylvania too white?
is it too grungy overall?
any other thoughts?Picture

The grunge is good.
I did not notice that it was PA until you said it.
PA is too white.
Go with something other than the default font (Times New Roman or whatever it is.)
Hmmm theres something else but I can't really point it out - maybe someone else can help me.

tom

Mess with the colors. That dark green and that light grey look cheap together for some reason. Also, don't have that quick gradient transition between the colors it doesn't go with the grunge flow. Outline your main text so it stands out, and you might want to get a political map of PA so you can tell thats what it is.

thanks- i changed the font, made the whites a lighter gray, got rid of the gradient, outlined the text. i'm working for a website with green and grey for the colors. i'll put up the changed one soon.