Need crit - reflections and manual shadowing...

Well, the title say it I guess.

Made a li'l pic, me first one actually with manually made shadows and reflections, and I need crit, 'coz I do not think it turned out as I wanted it to...;/

ciggie in a vase ;)

Also, a try at the perspective things...the "room"...Perhaps should have done it all in a more straight mode, eh ?

And...press space after the link, for it to work properly...

Aaaaaaaaaaaam waiting ;)

<---edit...
Ok, I see it for me self now, when trying the link...Wuhaooo, the fag is turned the wrong way, yupp.
So no comments on that, hehe ... stop edit--->

ummm my only jibe is that everything is too samall..... i have never seen such a small vase... but thats just my opinion

The perspective of the shadow looks wrong on the vase (the coloured one) I would imagine the shadow should be pointing to about 7 o' clock.

Its hard to get the shadow right because it seems you have Light comming from 2 different sides? and yeah the shadow is to small for the vase. Also I would have made the Vase a little bigger though. But it's still very nice Patteman... Fortsätt så ;)..

Actually, the reflection of the vase is ok. Its the angle of the cig on the reflection that is off. What you have there is more of a mirror-type reflection. Leave the vase reflect and move the cig reflect to point more to 5 o'clock.

Hehe, thx "gaiz"...

Yea, i know the vase is to small, but I wanted it to be...It was the ref and shadowing thing I kinda wanted crit of, and I got some pointers...I will do it again, and a li'l better...

...Its the angle of the cig on the reflection that is off...

Hehe, yepp. noticed that right after checking if the link was operational...So that will be fixed and thought of in things to come...


I'm a li'l into reflections and shadowing right now, so there will be more to come, and to have critisism about ;)

Fedza, you're swedish ? Kul, med mer svenskar här, vi är nog en tre fyra stycken nu

But thx for now...

:( I can't see it... no matter what I do - paste it into a fresh window, add a space....

I could just now. and an explaination is not needed I guess ;)

*like click on the link, add a space after the link in the new browserwindow, and press enter*

Must be a millenie bug ;)

hah - I see it now

uhh - I like the corner - wall thing - except for the color gradient that extends all the way under the vase... it should stop before the vase...

the reflexion is kinda skewed
did you make the vase? it's very nice
I don't know about the cigarette idea though....makes little sense to me

Hehe, wasn't meant to make sense. Just put something in there to make another reflection of, and I did that particular reflection the wrong way, hehe...So...

Yea, doesn't it look skewed, I though so too..

And no, I didn't make the vase...