it feels like this

I had this idea but it turned out kinda lame. It doesn't look finished, either. Any tips from you guys?

http://trhaynes.commscentral.net:8000/img/howitfeels.gif

tom

uuuuhh......i'm not feeling anything. what r u trying to say here???

he meens to be excluded :P dam didnt u get that ?

yes, i did get that. but the design doesn't do a good job of showing it. to me it looks like there's a big gangsa guy with a hunchback holding a bike helmet. then there's some hill billy guy with a cap. then there's a guy with sexy legs so that's why he's wearing a mini skirt. as for the guy who's sitting on the text, he's in pain because something got stuck in his foot. but hey, at least his hair is pimp stylin.

Thats umm...an interesting way to look at it lol..I think it's fine. It looks finished enough to me.

I like it...nice to see work that actaully has a meaning or something like that!
And I understood it right away :D
...And I like the hair of that guy sitting there!

I go nuts...I can't open your links, ever...I wonder if trhaynes place is locked out of our internetserver....Hm...

haha pat he banned only you - got scared after the peeing fish stuff:D

Hm, It prolly is that way...Have to go talk'im into letting me in ;)

The guy sitting down is the problem with the pic. For example, his nose is realyl sharp, his feet dont look like feet, and he is in a very strange pose. And you can't see his arms, or anything... i'd think a more suitable pose is one with the guy's elbows on his knees, just kiknd of leaning forward, hunchbacked

I agree though, DAMN that hair is nice

might wanna round out the calf muscle of the leftmost guy in the group

otherwise, it's nice :D