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Oct 12th 2003#124537 Report
Member since: Sep 16th 2002
Posts: 1876
Yep, well. Out with the old, in with the new. I made a new layout for my "website" -->

http://slonik.homestead.com/files/index2.jpg

Critique away!
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Oct 12th 2003#124554 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
I think this could go in the website showcase.

Ok. Critique time.. I think it's crap. No offense. You've been here a while, and you're not a photoshop nub. You can take it. :P

You've gotta keep usability in mind (is that a word?) But just imagine how impossible it will be to read text of any color on the checkerboard pattern. The antialiased text is hard enough, how much more for the actual html text?

The whole thing is nothing but a checkerboard pattern and the checkerboard pattern is VERY distracting to the eye, probably because of the sharp contrast (white to bright red). It also gets very monotonous, it could use eyecandy very much.

Just... I dunno. Back to the drawing board, I guess.
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Oct 12th 2003#124556 Report
Member since: May 12th 2003
Posts: 1088
i dont like it, its to long the text isnt incredibly readble,
and the colors seem a bit bland,

i luved ur old site i thought it was the right size and wicked surrounding,

sorry i give a thumbs down for this :(
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Oct 12th 2003#124585 Report
Member since: Jun 20th 2003
Posts: 1203
I don't like the new layout at all. Your old one was cool, this looks like something you threw together in 5 minutes.
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Oct 12th 2003#124590 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
ouch...my eyes. The boxes burn. :p
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Oct 12th 2003#124592 Report
Member since: Feb 17th 2003
Posts: 2450
uh - yeah - the checkerboard does hurt the eyes man...
think how regular text will look on that... don't change your old layout - I love the cherry/ruby coloured things in it...
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Oct 12th 2003#124601 Report
Member since: Sep 16th 2002
Posts: 1876
Hm, well, I didn't even realize that I made this thread, I basically coded the whole thing while changing it:

Here:
http://www.teamphotoshop.com/forum/vbforum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=18236
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Oct 17th 2003#125103 Report
Member since: Oct 16th 2003
Posts: 717
ah! that background is way to distracting. at least lighten it up more in the areas where the text will go.
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Oct 20th 2003#125449 Report
Member since: Oct 3rd 2003
Posts: 5
crap
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