Another newbie kinda piece...

...yet another easy piece (for you pro's I mean...), but fun doin it...Still learning, still trying, in a slow pace ;)

Have to stop posting so much, and start practise PS again.

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nice s- o what are u smok'n -- he he

maybe soften the edges a bit - they seem harsh - otherwise nice
job on the smoke

heathrowe

Whohoo, a comment. I thank you, Heath...

And you're right, I hae a tendency to rush things when I'm done with what I'm practising...smoke this time...Have to change that fact ;)

lookin good pimp ;)

Maybe add a bit more variation to the smoke, it seems to be a bit linear at the moment. Cool effect though :D

Do something with the pipe to make it look more like the smoke. The pipe looks real, the smoke looks like art. Make it so one is like the other and it will be great. Good job.

Gee, thx guy's...will open that psd up again and work on it...I'm getting some time now every other week, so I can get into PS again...will enjoy that.

maybe if you cut 1 pixel from the edge of the pipe... the lighter "line" around it....it just looks cut now... oh and maybe add a trickle of smoke on the other end of the pipe - you know - like someone just inhaled and there's still some smoke coming out of it....

I get a '403 - Restricted' message when I click the link.

Hmm, that happens a lot...mainly beacause the server haven't decided wether one shold be able to look at the actual .jpg or wether you have to create a html page...

rightclick/copy shortcut or copy that link after trying to open it...
Then it should work ;)