Look in the Machine

Ok, I'm really not all that impressed with this, but it took a while to do so I figured I'd post it.

Rip it to shreds.

http://www22.brinkster.com/lessthanloved/partrauma/machine.html

Edit: It's titled look past the machine, not in ... hehe, sorry.

It has too many black parts and too many jaggies.

Sorry man.. don't like this one at all.

I actually like the name... so maybe go with that?

Well, its kinda supposed to have a lot of black parts. It means something. It's like one of those pieces that have something it's trying to say. And ... I don't really see that many jaggies, so I'm not sure what you mean there. But thanks.

interesting 02, i like the colours in this. The soft green tones work really well, just seems a little empty though.

cool image all the same :D

Very cool image, i really like it

i like that, reminds me of holly, lol

yeah, i like this one as well..

and i dont mind the black spotz00rz ^_^

I like tha colours! =)

i have to go with jeser. I like dark images love them actually but it dosent work on this one it seem to me like it wants to be a happy picture not a dark one, make the colors brigter maybe, its good work just not that appeling to me.

I really like it but I wanted to make it bigger and I couldnt. Is that the regular size? Or did you scale it down - I sure hope so.

My first impression was a lot of stage lights turned off with light from the heavens pouring down in between them.

But I cant see that well since its so small and detailed..

tom

*edit* Just found an eye and two .02's :D