My first CG'ing ever

NOTE: I DID NOT DRAW THE PENCIL ART FOR THESE IMAGES, CREDIT WAS GIVEN TO THE ARTIST WHERE AND WHEN NEEDED


Now onto the art:

http://www.mszstudios.net/cg/seraphim_color.jpg - The first one I did

http://www.mszstudios.net/cg/mt-of-001_color.jpg - The second one I did around 2am. It is my favorite of the three.

and

http://www.mszstudios.net/cg/kimiko-004_color.jpg - The last one I did around 4am. It was late, so it is a bit skimpy on detail.

C and C please.

Thanks,

Mark

Yeah man they look great just because personally I don't know a $hit about coloring CG or draw anime, good, simply shades and stuff, I think you definitly got potential though man what are you like 14? And by the way your site: Anime-Stop.com, when is that gonna come out?

It has been out before, but we have just finished completely coding the review script, we need to get the content in, then we will be open with Anime, Manga, OST, and JPop reviews. ^.^

For starters - I know nothing about coloring, but I do know something about art. So heres some C&C from me:

1 - The hair to the left of her head (her right) should be a little darker in near her neck.

2 - Very nice. I see she's carrying her wings in her backpack. ;)

3 - I don't really like this one but that's not your fault. Maybe the sweater needs some texture since its so big and one-colored.

OVERALL - It looks wierd in some places where the line-artist did some shading him/herself and then you put in color over that. Like in #2 on the arm - there's some crosshatching with dark brown over it. And in numbers 1 and 2 there's a pencil line showing where the highlight on the hair is. That makes it look more realistic when its just pencil but after you color it, it looks kinda wierd. Sometimes you have the reflection in a slightly different place, too. So perhaps that could be changed. I dunno.

This has been another TO (tom's opinion) brought to you by tom himself.

tom

whats up mark..
lol jpop rox..

I like your colorings. you should do a coloring and remove the out side sketch lines.like clean them up.. i wonder how that would look.. But i totally like what your doing..keep up the work..

and thanks for the hosting..

Damn jpop. Burn in hell. I mean, good shizzle, i relaly like it, I just think that the colors could be done brighter on the last two, . Maybe a bit more optomistic. ... lol

Oh and youre missing the whites around the pupils... when Fred Gallagher colors his pictures he puts whites around the pupils... maybe you dont like doing that

oh and kimiko's hair strands, at the end, near the tips, some of the strands' colors look blotchy..

Overall though i think you did a good job, keep it up. :D

i like what i see....

wish i could do stuff like that

mine always comes out pants

they have really small mouths.