poster dance party

new posterdesign
for a danceparty (red edition - hence the color )

http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/poster-try06-f-web.jpg

comments very welcome

I really like it. The only thing I would say is that the "line-up" text looks too much like the text of the times. I don't know what color to make it or where to align it but it looks wierd where it is.

What if you change 10 to 22? Sounds cooler.

Make DJ's with the J capitilized and see how it looks.

I like it a lot. :D

tom

you're right about the 10-22!
how could I miss that.

I'll see about the "j", thanx for the comment

edited

Thats awesome.... I really love the trendyness of it and the colors are great. I like the mix of flashy text and normal text makes your eye kindof move around the poster to see everything. Great work. :D

thanx x_fusion_x & trhaynes

I followed your comments and improved the poster thanks to it.

Awesome! That would definatly get my attention to go to a party (and trust me, I've seen billions of rave fliers). Only complaint ... too much red.

Oh, and you might want to put a white border around it for printing reasons. ;) Depending on how its printed and cut, you might loose a few cm on one or two of your edges without a border.

Originally posted by .02
you might loose a few cm on one or two of your edges without a border.

I thought you hated the metric system :p

anyway, that's a damn cool poster...hope you have a larger version (for printing reasons)

lol. i do hate the metric system. on certain days.

yeah, thats a eye-catchin, trendy poster..

and in this case i like the trendiness.. maybe theres to much red as 02 said, but i still like it as it is..

great work..