My first collage...

What do you fellas (and girls) think?

http://www.t4dstudio.com/broken_dreams.htm

It may take a few to load...anyway I was just messin around with an idea.


Mara :P

a lot of things happening on your pic. I get a "tilted feeling" - probably due to that church or whatever - But I suppose since it's a broken dream it's as it should be
- nice

Now that you mention it, it does sorta have a tilted feeling to it.

Works though...

Thanx :D

I like how the font is half on the image and half on the white bit, but the font looks a little too harsh or blatant. Maybe it's the glow on there...

I dont like the amount of white stuff you have. And then its on a black background. I'm not really sure what I would do about it - the first thing I thought of was to blur the edges somehow or make it look like paper or something. So that the edges aren't straight. But I'm just brainstorming - I like it.

tom

What actually is a broken dream?

I like it. A lot. Reminds me of how my old style was. The textures, images, blending, color ... everything looks great. This is an awesome piece. I'd like to see it without any fonts on it though. Stick the title on the border or something ... I dunno. I've always thought that pieces like that look better without any text. Good job though.

Thanx for all the c&c... I can make several variations on the original... I am working on some other projects right now, so I will post when I get a chance.

Broken Dream: kind of a personal thing, but lets just stay, things didn't turn out as every girl dreams. Goes really deep...and is a verrrry long story.

trhaynes: I just stuck it on a dark background for contrast. The bg, aside from the white border can be any color you would like...suggestions? The paper idea is not a bad one. Thanx


Thanx again guys...... :D

Mara

I like it!!! The colors..images..feel of it....etc it all comes together nicely! The only thing i dont like too much is the text. Im with who ever said (im too lazy to scroll up) put it on the border. Id probably put it on the bottom border and center it. Also make the font smaller. Otherwise good job!

Originally posted by zwarte
What actually is a broken dream?

Wouldn't that be a nightmare?