My first pic

Hi...
New here, and this is my first pic I've eer completed in photoshop (I made a few poor quality concepts aswell)
if theres things wrong with it, can I get some critiscm? comments? advice? thanks

http://home.iprimus.com.au/bakenet/miasma.jpg
sorry it's so big

I like it a lot and there are a couple things I would say but its very good for a first pic ever completed. Better than a lot of mine now.

A little gaussian blur would be good in some parts to take away the small rippled effect. That looks to filterized, which is no good. Also, to make it a wallpaper - give it more text, etc. Put in some big text things set on overlay with low opacity and then some other text. Be creative with it as you have so far and you'll have something thats excellent.

tom

nicely done.

apart from what trhaynes said u coould also add some scanlines and change the blending mode to darken or screen or something like that. what u could also do is change the font size, make it a lil smaller.