A little tutorial mixing

Hi, everybody, i posted last week and didn't even get one response so i'm trying again. This is a little something i made with a tutorial, i'm trying to make it look better but i'm not sure how, can somebody help?
c&c

http://www.geocities.com/juvenilej2/New.html

haha, cool I had linkin park (Points of Authority) playing and it went well with the lighting.

Only thing, kill that text and dont use an outline.

My suggestion is hmm....... make it more like teamphotoshop tutorials and make several steps so people would understand it easier not just a whole picture

well here i changed it a little, I used a different link so people could see the difference
http://www.geocities.com/juvenilej2/ techie.html

Crap i hate that here
http://www.geocities.com/juvenilej2/techie.html

Hey, X-fusion I'm not to sure what you mean.

hmm... I dont know what I'm sayin either dawg lol anways I have some tutorials too take a look and see what you think by the way I dont think this post is in the right area :D

http://darkbo.hypermart.net/tutorial

Oh, cool, yeah i figured that, but it was to late

also dont use 800x600 pixel images if you're just going to scale them down.
is an unecessary use of bandwith.
and i didnt see any steps. just a hello buttons, and one that was jumping all about.
whats to be learned from no instruction?

Well, if you wanted instructions, why didn't you tell me, and x-fusion i checked them out, pretty good, i do think you should have a lot more. I hope you don't take that in a bad way are anything.