Logo design

very cool!
good job!

looks good.... it kinda looks like it says hoohum though

If its a logo then I think simplicity is better but that looks like a great t-shirt. I'll PM you my address and you can send me one.

tom

i think it looks great but its hard to understand , it took me a while to read hudlum... try making the "D" a little clearer,,,and you are set.

Sorry to say this but it's a bad design. For starters those lines that go through the handcuffs will disaper when you shrink the whole logo down. The text is also a little hard to read and as of right now I doubt I could even tell you what it said from memory.

On a good note I liked the detail you put into the cuffs. Good job mate.

Sweet!! Very cool-[p

The general concencus seems to be that the 'D' is not clearly defined enough to be legible. I would suggest adding a blue, broader section as you have done with some of the other characters (I mean thicken up the curved section of the D)

My concern also is that it will be hard to read and a lot of details lost when it is downsized.

Nice concept, just not totally sure how it will be realized in this format.

I think there's a little misuderstanding going on here. I'm not even sure what's right.

He said that it was a logo he was doing for a shirt company. That could mean that the graphic he showed us went onto the tag of the shirt or onto the front of the shirt in big letters. It would look good on the front of the shirt but not probably on the tag.

So either way.

tom

Hey guys,

Sorry I didn't quite make myself clear on this one....Hoodlum already has a basic logo, I was just making a t-shirt design for them....I said logo, oops...hehe...I am definetely gonna fatten the curved section of the D though....good advice all around...thanks...It will only be big on the front of a shirt!




Jim

On a side note, graffitti is not supposed to be super-legible. To some extent, that defeats the purpose. I mean, it's supposed to look like a tag, is it not? Tag, mind you, not being embroidered label, on the inside of the collar, but rather a tag meaning a quickly spray painted symbol, name, logo, etc. thaht is a trademark of a brand, person, gang, or whatever. I think it's evident that's what you were going for, and I'd definitely say you've achieved it.

That's just my opinion.