i know it's crap but it's my first :(

http://home.graffiti.net/chriso202/dodge/graveyard.jpg

it's my first pic of this kind (i norm do text or web stuff)

can someone tell me how i can improve etc?

thanks :rolleyes:

edit*

just did this http://home.graffiti.net/chriso202/dodge/graveyard_not.jpg

the first one quiet nice, u might wana add a lil bit/more gassian blur to the fog, cause to me at the moment it looks like a spray can on paint,

um the 2nd one just ruins it, i dont like that at all n.o


and i may just b picky but in the first one the tombstone is a lil shape on the top right ;)

what's up wiv the tombstone?

oh lol my bad

tombstone = broken weathering , lol

soz my lil thought, i was thinking of having a totally square tombstone then thought who the phook has that!? lol