euroball

assignment:
black and white poster for a gala evening for the staff at the european commission;
http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/euroball5-posterA3-bw-web2.gif

what do you think ?

note; english is not my native language, so please comment the mistakes

or is this one better ?:
http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/euroball-try3-posterA3-bw-web.jpg

The text could be way better, hard to read and doesn't really go with the background. You should clean that background up too, it looks to jaggy! Make it look more vectorlike.

mind that the poster is on A3-A2 size. The small text looks much better on print.. has anybody a better idea for the font (now they're all bauhaus-family)

- i don't want the vectorized look.

It's not that I value your comment, but the vectorized look is to modern for the event, the poster is already very modern for an event like that.

Oh sorry, I think I misunderstood... I thought you wanted vector, but didn't got far with the brightness/contrast trick.

Man I really like that eye. really soft and well done., sort of gets my attention., It´s kind of hard to make a poster in only black and white, that you still can read the text. Bu tI like it!

thanx for all comments, I edited the piece a bit (for readability, which seems to be a bit of a problem, regarding your comments, you see I value them ;) ) :

I was thinking about erasing the black bits in between the text, which I did here:
http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/euroball5-pos...rA3-bw-web2.gif

And I have another version, which is more 'grey':
http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/euroball-try3...erA3-bw-web.jpg

second good job
AF