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Layout for msz.studios

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Jul 5th 2003#111724 Report
Member since: Aug 25th 2001
Posts: 1619
http://www.mszstudios.net/mszstudios.gif

Tell me what you think. Be brutal.
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Jul 5th 2003#111730 Report
Member since: May 12th 2003
Posts: 1088
i like it simple and stylish,
im not to sure what that thing is in the upper left corner thou, lol
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Jul 6th 2003#111841 Report
Member since: Mar 29th 2003
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Girl and a surfboard I think.

I think it would look a lot better if you used a sans-serif font. But I tell that to everyone so no surprise there. Maybe some dark grey text as well to spice things up in the body.

tom
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Jul 6th 2003#111845 Report
Member since: Oct 9th 2001
Posts: 426
IdonĀ“t like the ending part of the layout, it sort of just breaks and I think you shouls work more on the bottom part. Other than that It looks good. And The text positions are great .!

Good luck with this work m8.
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Jul 6th 2003#111879 Report
Member since: Aug 25th 2001
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It isn't really showing the ending part of the layout, it is a top shot mostly. I changed it up a little taking some of NL's comments.

Here it is: www.mszstudios.net/mszstudios2.gif

(note I touched up the orange line a little so the vertical one furthest to the left doesn't go through the bottom most horizontal line)
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Jul 6th 2003#111884 Report
Member since: Feb 14th 2002
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to much gray change the colors up some gray is so dole...
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Jul 7th 2003#111922 Report
Member since: Aug 25th 2001
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www.mszstudios.net/mszstudios6.gif looks to be like the one I am going to be going with. Any more opinions?
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Jul 7th 2003#111932 Report
Member since: Jun 16th 2002
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The girl and surfer d00d(or whatever that is haha) see a little cut-off, might try moving them down a pixel or two and see if they look any better. Other then that GJ.
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Jul 7th 2003#111933 Report
Member since: Aug 25th 2001
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There isn't really a top to the girl on the right, the image was like that and the surfer CHICK I may try bumping HER down, see how it looks there.
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Jul 7th 2003#112032 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
Plain, plain, plain, plain, plain.

Even with all the orange and stuff, there's still just a lack of... stuff!

Put more stuff. whatever that may be, just put something so that I don't lose interest and fall into a coma 4 seconds after opening the link.
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