pain a motion picture . . . ( so dam proud o this one! )

pain the motion pic

i am so proud o this one!, i dont no why i no theres not alot to it but i just like it,

crits please

~regards

you need to make that red from the P fall more realistically otherwise im just looken at that like... hmmm... ya everything else is simple but.. impressive non the less gj

Damn fortunecity....ive tried multiple times and still cant see it :-(.

How bout "good job" now and i'll edit in the "crit" later. Thats the best i can do right now lol

dam, soz rodder,
try and look later,

i can still see it :(

rodder - put a space after the link that opens...
That should do the trick...
At least it helps for me...

About the image...
I would leave that blood that comes from the Pain word.
Well it's pretty simple but simple can be nice too...
Not really sure what to comment on...

lol....a million and one attempts later....guess who forgot to dump there cache?? I guess i had the Fortunecity logo cached so thats why it kept coming up.

Now i can see it just fine. I like it! Not sure bout "motion picture"...but totally gives off a "Playbill" feeling lol. You should be proud of it!! Its good work.

Now for crits:

You could spice up the center (the red blur). The blur works good as a background...but it needs something in the forground..right over it. I could totally see some kinda glowing yellow shape..maybe a faded photo of a lit candle?? Or maybe a white shape... just something needs to go infront of it so your eyes "focus" on it.

its cool... likeyou said, not much, but it's cool

cheers guys , im gonna edit this one , ill tell u the end result