my new business card.

i made it in PS and AI . i want to made it more presonly style:D
my frist business card,exciting~:D
business card

It would be easier to give feedback if you add the text too. But it looks ok until now.

Is it creditcard sized?

Looks very nice. A few points: That text in the corner will be so small. Well at least from sort of looking at it compared to the rest of the card.

Another thing, there seems to be a glitch in one of the lines, it curves around the top of the bottom circle, where the line meets a curve it looks like a goof. Not sure if it is.

Now from an artisitic side, I am not sure if I like the line that cuts off the circles.

But I like it! looks good. What kind of stock are you printing this on? Paper? or some kind of vinyl?

i lose creditcard sized:mad:

all text in the baCK.in the front .i do not want text to destroy the full style~:p

i am a new user in AI.so,some line is not smoothness.i try my best to get rid of it.:o
i paint it on paper~itis cheap~1/50$ per:D

Hey that's pretty suh-weet. I like the artistic side of it. But if you print it out, the text wont be legible unless the point is that you don't want it to be.

I disagree, i think that everything should be on one side of the card and nothing on the other.

You won't destroy the style on the front if you use the right kind of text.

Sweet job. Looks swingin.

looks nice, the only thing I don't like is the japanese/chinese characters at the bottom left hand corner. I know their the trendy thing to do, but lifes to short to be a sheep.

business cards are 2 inches by 3.5 inches


Snore

Originally posted by Snore
looks nice, the only thing I don't like is the japanese/chinese characters at the bottom left hand corner. I know their the trendy thing to do, but lifes to short to be a sheep.

i believe that's his name. if you look at his location, you'll notice that he's in China. Chinese people use Chinese.

okay.. well olnavi, its a good thing one of us is on the ball.. :rolleyes: Cause apparently I'm not.


Snore

i think that everything should be on one side of the card and nothing on the other.

Yeah i gotta agree with this. Having NO text on the front of your business card (that name in the corner doesnt cut it) almost defeats the whole idea. Ppl arent going to pay enough attention to remember that specific graphic "means" your company. Also a lot of cards are blank on back..so a lot of ppl wont even think about turning it over. Also $$ wise...it most likely would be cheaper to get one side printed than double sided.

i do not want text to destroy the full style

Well first you have a lot of room (the entire left half) for information so you wont destroy the design....

Second....you almost dont have a "style". What i mean by this is your card (with that graphic) is still really blank. All that empty space "over powers" your graphic. (i resized my opera window to 20%....so its as close to credit card size as possible and it still over powers it). Text would get rid of that effect.

As to the design itself....not bad. I like it.