My RSX CAR Advertisment

Here ya go all!

http://files.digisoftstudios.com/RSXFOREST2.jpg
Everything had to be done, there were no reflections, wrong lighting.. the car was orig on the hwy.

Looks cool. The forest needs work though. The quality does not match that of the car. It looks too posterized. Also, lose the lame copyright on the bottom. It totally ruins the look of the ad. If you are presenting this in a portfolio, you will be laughed at for copyrighting your work like that. Its just lame and so not needed. I think all beginers feel the need to throw it in cause they think its professional.

But overall, its pretty slick and sophisticated. Bravo on the typo. Small caps are sexy in ads.

Brilliant work on the reflections and blending of the car itself into the background, looks very real to me.
The thing that bothers me alot, is the fading of the black (on the right side) ...it's too obvious.

But nevertheless, nicely done.

the copyright is only there for you web people.

p.s. ill work on the black on the right.

Yeah, I know its for web, but two things.

1. It still distracts from the work, therefore critiqueing it is a bit spoiled.
2. It's not completly orginal in its own right, meaning this isnt groundbreaking work you've done. Its real good, but nothing that will change the advertising world. That being said, the risk you have of someone stealing this image and using it is almost non-existant.

Again, I always laugh seeing a copyright sign on something being critiqued. It really detracts...

Nice.

yeh i agree ,
very clean too

the car appears to be still in a forest yet the wheel is spinning at 60 mph.

that faded black really bugs me.

ya, im working on the wheel.
Its not faded black anymore.. the grey is the shadow since the light source it top left, there is also a tree in the line of sight.