My first intro page!

Hey all, this ain't the final version of my intro page, but I'm almost finished! If you have any comments, please post them!

btw, paavo I used your blood/rust tut for it... do you think it looks realistic?

here is the link
http://sofdl.homestead.com/files/Intro2.jpg

ps. the image is huge, but ill resize it and be sure to look at it full size

thats your first??? wow its a good start i love the water exxect what tool were used?

Wow... that's a lot of tutorials there...

It's pretty decent... however for an intro page it's entirely too gigantic.

barb wire and the reflection are really great, but yes it is too big

yeah, very tutorial-ish, but it's allright because it's so...massive.
The elements don't look that real, but it doesn't matter beacuse it looks cool in a comic-style-way.
I think it's really nice, really.

Hey thanks for your inputs guys. I know this work was made on many tutorials and that's probably its worst side, but I'll try to use them less in the future.

As for the size, don't worry it won't be that big, I just forgot to resize it before posting it. :p

Anyone think I should add/remove something on this? thx again, much appreciate :D