finally... work from mwa

first inspiration ive had in 3 months...
critique away...
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hm, idea is ok.. but some critics on the pic:
- the blood doesn't really look realistic
- these curves/lettes/somewhat in the bottom make no sense.. do they?

Nice. I like it.... especially the floor/tv stand area. Even though I kinda agree about "these curves/lettes/somewhat in the bottom make no sense.. do they?"...it almost doesnt bother me. The top could maybe use a little work...its something about the font...it doesnt quite fit in with the rest of the image. Its like a little too fancy or something. But otherwise nice.

Also if your care to join...im starting an anti-inspiration club lol.
Im kinda the president after my cry for help::
http://www.teamphotoshop.com/forum/vbforum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=15016
Its got a couple good ideas in it..maybe it can help??

well i dont know if this is a personal thing, but i would get rid of that girl on the tv, looks very fake and is much too bright. and the blood seems to be floating on its own plain. doesnt seem to be on the barrel.

yo, that gun won't take a clip. respect.

weeeeiiiirrrdddd.....

And you've got some spelling/grammar problems with the text. It should read "My mind's the weapon, and my heart's the extra clip." With the apostrophes. Or write it out - "My mind is the weapon, and my heart is the extra clip." Either way its a decent piece of artwork. But I can't stand spelling/grammar problems.

tom