grungy, personal thingie :P

hey guys, and girls..

I would like som feedback on my latest 'piece' (<- whatever)..

It's actually a creation made for, and by, personal matters. Yes, an ex-girlfriend and you all know how painfull this **** can be

so bare with me for the sensetive, maybe even ridiciolus, 'quotes' i made up, descriping it all a little..

bare with me.. so, bring it on

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WTF, i need to learn how to do this...:(

lovely...

I just can feel the emotions in the pic. I hope this makes you feel better and get over that devil-relationship-thing you were in.
Cheers, NL.

haha, devil relationship? x)

Yeah, it's a good piece.
I'm not a huge fan of grunge generally, but I like this one alot.
The message comes through very well, and it looks...well...just..very good.

well done
it catures the emotions well


heathrowe

Looks pretty good, I know the feeling and it sucks loosing someone you love just blows the big one :p

But I think you showed the emotions good in the image, like everyone else said, and overall I think it looks great. I really like the guy walking in the picture makes it feel like he's lost and just wondering around...

Anyways... Nice work man :D

I don't like grunge too much either. And you want to know why? Because it is over used and is used for everything and anything for no rhyme or reason. It's used just because thats all the person knows how to do, and to certain crowds, it always gets a "oooh, looks great."

But this is terrific. It's not overdone. Not every square inch is all "grunged up". It is effective and powerful and the message fits the style. And I also know you have a wide range of style so that makes this even more effective, just another corner of your mind that you used to create it. I commend your ability to know when enough was enough here and that you didnt go overboard. I love it.

Cheers to you.

thanks guys..

im glad you like it.. and thx for all the great comments.. it means a lot, especially when its as personal as this one ;)

that is very good -is that an airplane hangar?
You can feel the emotion...I like it a lot - not a great fan of grunge myself but as stated before this is not overdone and the style actually improves the feeling....

it's is very nice! The only thing (I know it will sound stupid): I would try putting the "missing you" in bold like the other bits ("and then loose it...")
Just my 2 cents
xl