A Heart Feels... pain

Sup ppl. Here's 1 of the 3 artworks from the serie ' A Heart Feels... ' called Pain. The next one will follow soon (which are Love and Hate) :D

Please feel free to tell me what is wrong/ugly/ or nething that u dont like. Thanks alot ! Peace :p

http://www14.brinkster.com/frank16/Pain.jpg

YOU MUST COPY IT AND PAST IT !

i dont see the message w/ the image. i gues i can't see deep stuff like that.

Uh.. well.. im not here to get my inspiration criticize... :confused:

it's not bad - but I really don't like the font on the green part...Also I feel the two sides don't exactly match - nor do the clash pleasantly....I dunno maybe it's me... -the green part is nice I thik - kinda' trendwhorish tho...

im with mihai, you have two completely different things, that just seem put together and have no relationship with eachother. but if you see the relationship i guess its fine since its yours.

i m with amen first then mihai

my brain gets totally thrown out of wack when the concept (usually anounced by the title) has absolutely no direct bearing on the composition...but thats just my brain...

tho i like the texture on the (my)right side

heathrowe

yeah i have to agree, i don't see "a heart feels pain" in it anywhere except in the text... but thats me

Well the left side which is a few simple filters is ok. Kinda simple. The right side which is a slightly jaggy noised 3ds max shape is decent. The font is usual. The relationship between the two sides isn't present.

So, I don't think it's that good at all. Of course, if you see a relationship then good for you. However since we all don't see it, I would incorporate that link into the image. And get rid of the jaggies....and change the font and it's positioning.

Ok thanks everyone for the reply. I tho i finally had create sumthing descent, guess will b for the next time hehe.

Ok well, ur right on the message thingy. No one could find what i meant to say, nor my friend or family, but actualy, the image itself isnt suppose to represent a heart feelin pain.. it should represent pain itself, my way of seein it..

Also, i know i totaly have 2 different style in this. This is what i wanted to get. But maybe after all this isnt a good idea. So im gonna work on that. But could u tell me, Is there nething good in there or ive create a peice of crap ?

Thanks, peace out. ;)

hey g0d

don't give up

keep at it

heathrowe