2 new tattoos

So the word spread, and I got 2 new offers to make a tattoo.
This time around the navel, so they both are of cours round.
And i could need some critic if i keep modifying them...

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some of those lines as well as spaces will dissapear, they're too small. must take into consideration the canvas you're working with when designing tats, skin changes throughout time and the ink spreads little by little as well. when you design lines that thin and spaces that small it ends up looking really bad. the first design is pretty cool, but too tight for a tat, not feelin the second one . . . it looks like it belongs on a map for directional purposes.

hey those would make great vector shapes - not really sure about tatoos - I mean you gotta have a theme for those - but the designs are nice...