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made a logo.. |
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Mar 6th 2003 | #94215 Report |
Member since: May 1st 2002 Posts: 3034 |
so I made a logo for some company... just wondering what you guys thought |
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94236 Report |
Member since: Jul 15th 2001 Posts: 2019 |
maybe put the arrow more on the top? i don't know...nice house
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94243 Report |
Member since: May 1st 2002 Posts: 3034 |
by more on the top do you.. invert its current position ?... anyways thanks for posting!. atleast someone did :D
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94255 Report |
Member since: Nov 24th 2001 Posts: 66 |
I'd suggest making the text a little more readable. The close kerning and contact with the house cause lost readability. Also, the dark arrow swoosh pulls my eye away from the text, and the way it's shaped draws them downward and away. Fix those issues, and it would be much better. |
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94256 Report |
Member since: Aug 30th 2002 Posts: 159 |
the lines are too different, you've got thick text, a thick arrow and the lines that make up a house are thin. a logo needs consitancy. the straight base of the house (the bottom line) conflicts with the curved line of the arrow . . . it needs flow. i would also consider doing a different view of the house the front face approach is rather dull and takes away from the whole 360 concept, cuz it looks kinda flat. |
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94259 Report |
Member since: May 1st 2002 Posts: 3034 |
hmmm.. sounds like an idea time for a litte editation! http://www.zyconium.com/other/logo2.gif .. am I getting closer ? |
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Mar 7th 2003 | #94274 Report |
Member since: Jun 9th 2002 Posts: 1283 |
the lines are too narrow, needs more contrast i think.
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