tell me what you think

http://automatisering.intechno.nl/gfx/showcase.jpg

kind regards

frans

It's ok, the gradient is far too plain, it's just too obviously a normal gradient, maybe some distortion, a reflection and/or some noise or something would make it look a bit more original.
Also, the text at the bottom isn't too readable.

It's still nice to look at, just needs a tiny bit of work.

did you make the eye from scratch, if so it looks very good, really like the eye, the text is kinda boring tho

* c'mon man, watch the spelling Ruud. I fixed your post, couldn't understand it at first

I dunno :\ the eye is really well done... the overal image just seems to be missing something, I'm not sure what it is...

Not bad... I agree.. Gradient too plain, other than that it's descent! (Even though I probably couldn't do that!)

thanks, the eye imade from scratch, (see tutorial on this site) only i took it one step further bij using 3d objects

hey, its not just missing anything. Your 1 is too big.....you are using a lot of space for a not a lot of content....which makes people say its boring. Use space effectivly. =) good job though.


-Ryan
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I think it looks alright but i dont like the background at all... the look beyond anything blablab stuff... it just makes it looks really cluttered, but other then that i think it looks alright. :D