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Feb 19th 2003#91491 Report
Member since: Nov 25th 2002
Posts: 20
I'm working on a project with the XBConnect team. We have developed a program that creates a tunnel over the internet that can connect Microsoft xBoxes allowing for some awsome online games. Our one year anniversary is coming up and we're thinking of getting some tee's printed up in communications class I'm in. I've layed out the design but I'm struggling with the front. I feel like a complete n00b compared to some of the talent I've seen here but I'm really hoping you guys could help me out.

XBConnect.com Website

Front

Back

Pocket


Edit: Addded pocket image. I'm thinking to scrap the front image and just use a simple XBC text on the pocket?
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Feb 19th 2003#91512 Report
Member since: Jul 10th 2002
Posts: 1706
Well, one thing I will say for sure, because I think this will help lead to other improvements, there are waaay too many fonts going on. 1, 2 at the max is all you want. Much too chaotic having so many fonts. I think if you adddress this issue, maybe it will help resolve some of the other aspects of the tee.
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Feb 19th 2003#91528 Report
Member since: May 1st 2002
Posts: 3034
I'm not sure :\ its a good start... but it just doesn't make me go.. "wow.. I want that shirt"..
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Feb 19th 2003#91631 Report
Member since: Feb 19th 2003
Posts: 5
I think it's very plain and simple - what's the call to action?
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Feb 20th 2003#91691 Report
Member since: May 31st 2002
Posts: 5
I agree with Spectra, K.I.S.S
Go to one or two fonts. For a more "edgy" kind of look, you can "squash" the font a little to get a compressed look and feel.
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Feb 21st 2003#91864 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
Yep, I agree... I dont think i would buy that shirt... its way to simple theres nothign that would make me go "wow, that shirts sweet.. i have to have it.." you know what i mean...

Its a good start though, keep building on it and i think it will look alright
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Feb 21st 2003#91905 Report
Member since: Feb 13th 2003
Posts: 44
Color...needs more color. One of the rules I try to follow when designing t-shirts or business cards is "If it was in a pile with other t-shirts, would it stand out?" It needs something that makes you want to look at it again if you only caught a glimpse the first time.
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Feb 21st 2003#91922 Report
Member since: Jul 6th 2002
Posts: 316
i dun like the way the xbcconnect.com looks kinda odd and the x doesn't seem to wanna be there...
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Mar 5th 2003#94031 Report
Member since: Jul 15th 2001
Posts: 2019
i pretty much agree w/ everyone else. doesnt really seem very xboxish either, looks you're trying to sell me a mac or something :P Just keep thinking different *rimshot* and follow some people's advice, it all sounds pretty good.

at it's current stage, i'd buy it if it were printed on a black shirt. (assuming the white in the images were transparent in format)
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