Face

Well dunno, had start that, not finish yet... what u think so far ?
i know theres almost nuttin actually :(

http://www14.brinkster.com/frank16/Face.jpg

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comment plz !

it's good, not the style that i would use but, i like how the lips are big and full. The eye looks..unhappy..but i guess you want it like that
for the eye, there is usually a black outline around the colored area around the pupil
but i can see that your not done
i also like the shading on the lips, and i think the nose needs more shading (drop shadow, etc)

also, it may just be me, but i think the nose & mouth are too far apart, because you need that indent between them, it'd be a huge indent XD oh, and if it's a girl (which it looks like), i wouldnt think the eyebrow would be that bushy, unless you want it to be

really nice job overall though

the drawing is god, but the proportions aren't, like i mean the nouse isn't that far from the mouth and the eyes aren't that far from the nose

Here mayby this will help you. Eyes are about 1 eye from eachother, to get the mouth right draw 2 lines downward from the middle of the eyes. (In manga it's from the corners of the eyes, so it's smaller. I'm not encouraging to get into manga anyway :p)

http://pluto.imagemagician.com/images/jens/Face.jpg

Hey thats pretty good, thx ! Well, that was basicaly an experiment that i was doin, i started off by doin an eye, then went with the nose, and then add the mouth, thats y proportion r so bad. But thx neway, im not use to drawnig face, that will help alot