New card for another picture book

I like to make bizcard sized cards for my picture books to pass out to interested folks as theyare developing. Here's the next one...

PICTURE HERE

Mostly just the story at this point, with some roughed in pictures. Anyone interested, here's the URL and password. Let me know what you think...

www.eyewoo.com/write/lucky/index.html
USERNAME: reader
PASSWORD: mom

cute, these webstories like this could catch on, I could see them on like PBS or other websites for kids.

i like your style alot man i think it's great. good luck w/ what you're doing and keep it up, i think the style is really nice. good job

oh and I like your style, lol

lmao... those are some awesome pic in that story, great imagination on all of those creatures and flying things... nice work eyewoo as usual :D

nice work and interesting story. very talanted

Hahahha, this is a killer work man you are the true professionall in design and Illustrations.
I like this very much, if I was a kid I would love your work, they are to telling, it´s like you don´t have to read the book. Im just another fan of you.

Keep up the GREAT work friend ;)

and sorry for my bad english.

Thanks for your comments... I'm not having much luck trying to get this one published... but I am getting some nice reject letters that tell me to keep at it... Oh well... guess that's what I'll do - keep at it!

oh yeah, eyewoo, keep at it. You'll get your break with a great style such as this.