a nice wall paper with a coloured pigeon!

http://www.nbuu.com/images/wallpaper_shrom.jpg

That is what i came up with when i was trying to make a black/dark blue color wallpaper. the pigeon in the middle is a sketch that my friend did, and i colored. I kinda like the blue tone in this pic, what do ya'll think?
all constructive comments are welcome :D

i like it but what does my opinion matter lol. pigeon dont really look like one. Needs to be cleaned up on the edges and made bigger

There is one thing I really like on this wallpaper...
The thingy on the right side the "round pipe thingy".
That's nice...

good work ; of course there are some things which need a improvements: work with composition, text, pigeon but anyway i like it. nice colors, nice pipes...

its not just a pigeon, its a ninja pigeon!
lol my friend drew it so no comments on that.
and the pipe was very simple to make, but thanks anyways.

more comments?

hi, i like where your going with this, but it seems like you started with the ninjeon in the middle as your main focal point. i'd add more textures to 'bind' it all together, and pay more attention to the final composition. looks good so far tho.

Personally i think the pegeon is actually decreasing the value of this graphics. Because it is hand drawen it doesnt look at clean and vibrant as the rest of your wall paper. I would personally take it out or do some manipulating on it first and if you do plan on taking that out your gonna want to bring down the whole middle over with the photoshop noob down to make a new focal point. also try to add some more stuff inside of it its looking pretty empty right now.

oh ya.. whats that yellow thing there?

looks to me like a *bling* *bling* sword.

thanks for your comments, im certainly going to add more stuff into it. and i didnt start out with the ninja pigeon in the middle, it was the last thing that i added to it.

and yes, the yellow thing is a *bling bling* of the sword.