Creation of the layer 17

Hi,
This is my work for one competition . I had to create 1 pic and using 5 sources.
What do you think? Thanks a lot, guys!
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Here:
http://site.voila.fr/freddi007/natpoit_creation.htm

It's way too small IMO, then again, maybe it was in the rules about the size?

If it was a lot bigger, I think it would look good.

Yes, 400*400 maximum, 100Kb.

looks pretty good but as paavo said, if the image size was a bit larger, it would look a little better. Nice job.

yes, i know... May be you can looking for some errors in technique or ... concept. I like when you critic, guys ; if you'll say only "looks pretty good" i'll stay forever 'beginner' ... ;) . Hehe. :D

well, ok..

I don't like the texture on the floor, it's too strong somehow, and takes away from the whole.
I hate lensflares, and hope we all do, so I'd change that into "hand made" blurry shines instead..

The laser beams or something, stop too fast, without any effect where they hit the thingie in the end..

The text in the background is unreadable, because of the beveling and the fact that it's behind other stuff, maybe place it somewhere else, or skip it all together..

The texture on the walls, the crap on them is too strong too IMHO, I'd make them less eyecatching, and maybe even replace them with some stylish grunge brushing to get that worn out and old and crappy effect..

But, as I said I like it, you almost begged for critique. ;)

Thanks, Paavo. I didn't know that you can be real. Thanks ;) And please, as for my works, write me true. I'll thinking about that (your critic) tomorrow. I love you (almost)

ok; i was thinking. Too strong text of the waals&floor : i agree but i wanted to do it; as for lens - yes, here i'll change something;
ending of the lazer stop too fast, without any effect ? - deformation of the glass.
The text in the background is unreadable - i've tried a lot of here... and i dont want to do it (my sig) readable, cause i'm afraid of wrong concentration, d'u underst what i mean?
Ufffff; thanks Paavo.

hmm try experimenting with depth..blur somethings en sharpen others and the 2 things coming out of the ground are just flying...you do'n t get the impression they realy are on the ground.
the mask is to blury...and they need shadows and try to put a nice colorburn or dodge on the laser beams.. =)

Thanks , i know RAGNO all about that. Really bad work. Here -->
other version, may be you'll like it?
http://www.teamphotoshop.com/forum/vbforum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=11685
Not too easy to work with sources wich i don't like.