iPalm

http://cyblingdesign.com/images/ipalm.jpg

Well....it's better than this isn't it?:

http://cyblingdesign.com/images/innpad.jpg

I need comments....bad & good. Need to improve this as much as possible. Thanks!

That needs no improvements... plain and simple..

Mayby the sides of the inset (where the window is) are a little bit too reflective.

I think the table and the room make the Innpad insignificant. Gets lost in the picture. Its no longer the focal point.

yah i think the window is a bit too reflective, since i would think they would use a LCD screen for it, which are not very reflective at all... the model is great though.

I'm re-rendering it as we speak, a few adjustments...i'll post it later on. I need to have a tabel, becuase it need something to lie on, and i need a room for the reflection map. No two ways aabout it unfortunately. The last thing i want is a silly grey floor, boring and dull. I'm trying to capture warmth here..brb

doesn't it have a few buttons or something?

It has a stylus...i'm making that more obvious in the current render..no buttons needed.

I like the table and the room, dont get me wrong. What I was noticing is that the Innpad is really small and you can't see much detail in it. If you were working on creating the little box then make the focal point of the image the Innpad, It looks great though.

lol, i'm not working on creating it for real...it's jsut a little industrial design that's all I've zoomed out a bit more to reveal more now