The Mind's Eye

http://www.derekschessworld.com/graphics/bluedune-copy.png


I'm pretty new at this and this isn't anything compared to most of the other graphics I've seen out there but...

It's called The Minds Eye. I'm looking for advice on how to improve it.

not a big fan of the font used in "the mind's eye" .... maybe smaller, different font.

perhaps a little more contrast on the eye part to set it off from the rest.

it you aligned the swirl so that it begins in the pupil area of the eye it may be a bit better.

try playing with the layer blending modes and you may get some interesting effects with this.

Good thinking I say. But as chelle said, aswell...There are things to be done 'bout it...Keep on, nice work.

And before Paav does this....Pls post a link instead of the actual image in the thread