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hello,
i have been working with this piece for a while. i keep redoing it because i dont like the way it has been turning out. i'm still not sure i got the affect i was going for, but i think the problem may be the render. the main image is pretty much done, i still have to add the typography and some doodles. but just let me know what you think.

[URL=http://www.syndicate-studios.com/backrounds/17th.jpg][ link ][/URL]

it looks good.... i think you should lose the line for the light...... try lighting affects in PS.... i think youll get a better result

i agree with the white line and some of the edges need cleaning up(just a render problem), but other that, I ENVY YOU

very nice wish i could do that

Looks really nice...
could be maybe a bit more sharp...but that's just my opinion

thats amazing . the only thing that bothers is me is the white light ray

okay, i added masks to each of the 6 layers of the same render i used(diff blending modes/opacitys) and i brushed some of the sharp edges. the light ray is out and i added a tint of blue on the "energy" in the center of the piece, rather than just plain white. check it out.

[URL=http://www.syndicate-studios.com/other/17th_fixed.jpg][ link ][/URL]

please excuse the size of the image...i'm not good with saving for web ;\

that looks better, good job

for the light ray, it may have been neat to use a smallers bit of radient then use layer options to give an outter glow
..
just a thought
then lower the opacity a bit, I sorta liked it :|
anyway.. its still nice either way

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