New Guy Here

let me make a proper intro...
In dedication to 911

http://tmp.phex.net/Intimewewillheal.jpg

Edit : Your URL is soooooo long it didn't parse right. So i saved your image and put it on my server.

Not bad, but you need to host your images elsewhere, those long urls don't parse right here, unfortunately

Hi, and welcome.

It looks pretty good man.. nice work and welcome to the board :D

everybody uses clocks some time. it's nice though

I like it.

Theres only one thing that I'd say. Lose the text. It doesnt really blend into the photo and so looks just like an after thought.

Apart from that, a deffinate thumbs up.

Bombs, blessed by "God", shatter the landscape
And as innocents are slaughtered with the guilty
The masterminds of this *Justice* gain public approval

The circle of violence continues
Unbroken since the dawn of civilization
Fat, old hypocrites control the seats of power:
Our nations & our beliefs
None willing to admit they might be wrong
But all willing to lay waste to human lives
In their power struggle

Thousands of kilometers away
A child stands with an AK47 in his tiny hands
Violence & intolerance is all he’s been taught
And he’ll never live to see his next birthday

Across the ocean
A flag waving patriot is ready to kill
For his misguided sense of freedom
He’s been reared on tales of glory
And taught to follow orders without question
He’ll never know anything more
Than what’s been shoved down his throat

Misguided fools, all of them
Nothing more than puppets of their *leaders* and religion
Double standards, intolerance, greed & arrogance
Are the new criteria of our leaders

that is a lot better than some of the stuff newbs put out!! good work