Hows this look.....

New thing-a-mabob How is my new thing-a-mabobb so far. Be harsh if you want.. i know its simpal... :confused: :rolleyes:

dont like it, sorry

I don't like it either. :(

You need some colour in your life man.. Black is great, just have it contrast with something, that way it stands out more. Right now its too much like a "shadow," nothing stands out cause its too dark. But if it had alot of say... _____(colour choice here) you'll get a much more dramatic effect. But from your first one, the clarity is getting better and your graphics are looking smoother. Maybe dont be so excited to show the first thing you do. Its great to have feedback from people, but you should critique it first, tweak it till your stumped, and then come and ask for a group synopsis. Instead, it seems that you do something and dont fully bring out what your trying to achieve before showing. There defianalty are some positive elements to your work so far. What you need to do is bring em out a bit more so the criticism from everyone can be more constructive. ;)

nice speech! i agree

yeah i guess... But im all for critasism.. so yeah plus i was puting sumthin in the back other than black ... arg damnit..... Ill keep plugin away at it hopefully i understood ur speach.. heh well thanx for that ill do it from now on

im so arigant.. cant spell..

yo i think I finished it.. I added color got rid of most of the black.. I put a background on it =). i think it looks much beter =) i have 2 different versions

Layout 2

Layout 3

Layout 2

layout 3

I put rotten links before

I like seeing the return of binary code.. as long as it's used well. I think it fits how you used it.. it's pretty sexy