first flash movie

first flash assignment in my course, we were required to show we know how to use motion tweens.

http://piercedesigns.com/flash/girlflash.html

what you think? good for first try? I was going for the 2advanced look lol.


2nd http://www.piercedesigns.com/flash/e-leetflash.html


flash is fun!

i like... very simple

but hte text on the 2nd doesnt fit.

I think it would be best if it only went thru the cycle once, instead of looping. Unless that was a requirement of your assignment.

hm, lol the assignment was pretty vague

2nd one works better visually but it gets too bright/white. and yeah, text on that doesn't fit. the shape the scales up the right side on the first one bothers me, the perspective is just random and doesn't match anything. if it matched the train i think it would work pretty well.

chris

hehe yea, its a start ;)