Review my Creations !

Hi Friends,

Plz. review my creations @ www.milindonline.com

Any suggesions / comments would be highly appreciated.

MiLiNd
www.milindonline.com
PEACE OF MIND IF MORE PRECIOUS THAN TONS OF DOLLARS

Post it in the right place!

Please read the sub-forum header descriptions!

#1 Tons of dollars would be peace of mind. So lose that silly tag line.

#2 It looks like you have enough work under your belt that you should be more confident in your presentation. What exactly are you looking for when you ask for "suggestions / comments"?

#3 As U23 said, posting in the correct forum would go a long ways towards demonstrating your ability to pay attention, follow directions, and be a team player. And as coincidence would have it, those are also all abilities that will help you land jobs / projects.

Well...a million one dollar bills would be just over 2000lbs (a ton), so tons of dollars would be atleast two million dollars.

And you might want to touch up on your grammar a bit. Nothing looks more unprofessional than bad grammar. (I think pictures of pink bunnies dancing to the hokey pokey is tied). For example, the first thing I read was "Ideas are like Circles you never know from where it begins and where it ends". That right off the bat, whether I mean it negatively or not, makes me think you aren't professional, or dedicated enough to read your work over before you turn it in, figuratively speaking. "Ideas are like circles--you never know where they begin or where they end" would be a much better way of phrasing it. I understand the possibility of English being a second language to many people, but if you are aiming to serve English speakers, you should atleast appear like you know it well. Get a friend to proofread it, etc.