is this out?

Got a new host so direct image linking for mr. trhaynes now. :D

http://trhaynes.commscentral.net:8000/img/gendes4_2.jpg

Be supercritical - I need it.

tom

Looks a bit 1990'ish. The bevel looks strange, and the font looks a bit "Rough."

Cool concept though (BTW your sig rocks).

Nos.

I don't know if it's just me or the pill style thing seemed too tutorially, should add more elements to it (soft metal, etc.) another suggestion is if 3D design doesnt work out 2D design is a lot easier to make.

cheers

Work on it some more. A lot more. It's really simple. All you did was make a shape, add a bevel and maybe something else, then put words on it. You should spend more time giving it the feeling that YOU created it ... not a tutorial.

There's no theme. It's just a box. Theres nothing there that would catch my attention to make me want to come back for more. It's really simple and boring.

Keep workin on it. :D I'm sure you'll come up with something.

It's plastic, not bevel, but you're right - I didn't really make it - just made the shape and followed a tutorial.

So basically thats what someone else told me and I just needed to know if anyone else agreed. Which case - well actually I've already started on another one. :D I'll upload that pretty soon for C&C. Thanks guys for your help.

tom