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Jun 10th 2003#107696 Report
Member since: May 12th 2003
Posts: 1088
dude i have i told him i was posting it and hes took in what u said , havent said about the snot comment yet cause couldnt get a hold on him this morning, but yeh he knows thnks for the not so nice comments, lol ;)
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Jun 10th 2003#107773 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
Heh. no problem.

Again, like I said before (and please tell him), that I feel the best way to critique something is to drive it into the ground. There's no sense in saying something that I don't think is true. beating around the bush has no positive effect, and thus is a waste of time.

The blunter and to-the-point you are, the more the person will learn.

Not to deter you from anything, I just want you to know my true opinion.
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Jun 11th 2003#107859 Report
Member since: May 12th 2003
Posts: 1088
dude hes looked he looked from the beginning :P

and i hope you come to this thread again cause just to let you no the snots gone ;)

heres the link again just so u havent got to scroll up
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Jun 11th 2003#107872 Report
Member since: Jun 11th 2003
Posts: 14
As you have seen lol ive changed it >__<' i have made awesome layouts for others just when it come's to making my own i always keep changing mind couse i want it to be good but nm that thnx for the comment peace dude's
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Jun 11th 2003#107943 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
controllaX. I know the feeling. I often times will go through periods of repetitive scrapping of my own designs.

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It's not as ugly anymore. The color scheme now is Way better. however I think it's not a good idea to put a company motto so large on the page, rather than your company's name. People won't see your name as the first thin gon the page, instead they see a motto that any company could have.

The banner is boring. it's just an effect, or something. And a paintbrush and a laptop. wooh. You should make that look more interesting, or soemthing. Do something to it.
I also don't like how the banner abruptly stops at the right.

the wire loops at the top left and bottom right of the box are badly done and I think would look nicer if they weren't there.

the heading bar of each box should be made nicer, the emboss-engrave look really doesn't look that nice.
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Jun 11th 2003#107947 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 6632
Half of the page is cut off for 800 x 600 users, forcing them to scroll or just not see half of your page.

The wires and the little hanging bolt things are pointless and don't fit with anything else on the site.

Do not center body text, it looks like crap and is hard to read.

Your content area is too wide for the amount of content you have. It looks very empty and like you don't really have anything. I'd get some more content, or add a third column to take up more space. Or just make the page variable width so it will not take up so much room.

Is "Art has taken a new turn" the title of the site? Or Controlla Project X? Controlla project x should be the title of the current page "Home, Contact Us, etc" not the title of the site.

The font for "art has..." is boring. And the title of the site should go there instead.
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Jun 11th 2003#107949 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
ah I forogt, I'm viewing this site from a Mac right now which has a huge resolution, so it would appear smaller to me than ti would on a 1024x768 or something.
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Jun 21st 2003#109504 Report
Member since: Jun 11th 2003
Posts: 14
Hey there ive made another layout in micro style i want youre comments on it ^_^
Oh and i know i can do better though but i just suck at making my own site's couse i want it to be great but mostly ill get stuck not knowing what the best is to do .
Oh and dont look at the dead links though im still checking if im gonna use this layout or another Greetz
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Jun 22nd 2003#109577 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
Um, I think I'm missing siomething. The page is just a gray background and text.
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