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Apr 13th 2003 | #99686 Report |
Member since: Mar 29th 2002 Posts: 108 |
hey guys, been awhile since i've posted here, but this is my first work in a very long time, actually its my third completed site ever... need some critique, thx in advance. http://mywebpages.comcast.net/ruffy/RAIN.html |
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Apr 13th 2003 | #99688 Report |
Member since: Jan 9th 2003 Posts: 60 |
Navigation could use some work, but I like the layout and design. Probably because it looks a lot like my site, lol.
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Apr 14th 2003 | #99840 Report |
Member since: Mar 29th 2002 Posts: 108 |
cmon guys 31 views, and 1 reply? thx JAGed for teh reply |
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Apr 14th 2003 | #99895 Report |
Member since: Mar 25th 2002 Posts: 1143 |
The blue is far too overpowering, it hurt my eyes to concentrate on it, also the fontface used on the blue is blurry, if you have saved it as a jpeg I would try a GIF.
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Apr 15th 2003 | #99916 Report |
Member since: Jan 9th 2003 Posts: 60 |
There is also a flaw in the rollovers that i just noticed. When you put your mouse over the first three links the text (Home, Roster, Forums) the text on the button jumps up a bit.
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Apr 15th 2003 | #99917 Report |
Member since: Jan 9th 2003 Posts: 60 |
And the blue text with the black outline is difficult to read as thehermit said.
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Apr 15th 2003 | #99968 Report |
Member since: Mar 29th 2002 Posts: 108 |
The rollovers look like they are jumping out because of the difference in colors. The backround and text is opposite the original image.
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Apr 15th 2003 | #99969 Report |
Member since: Mar 29th 2002 Posts: 108 |
Also, it doesnt 'jump up' in the last 2 buttons because most of the button is covered in text
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Apr 18th 2003 | #100304 Report |
Member since: Jan 1st 1970 Posts: |
First a 'tip' in receiving critiques: Don't try to justify yourself, point out why someone is incorrect in their interpretation of your work, or heaven forbid--argue. Try to simply say, "thanks for the input" and let it go. It's up to you in the solitude of your computer to decide what to do with people's advice. I like the site overall; nice work. One issues that jumped out at me was the kerning is TOO tight on your nav buttons and header text. I think it's okay to use that font if you like, but you need to increase the kerning so I can read it. Here's a little reading-- http://www-class.unl.edu/advt498/readings/spacingoutwithtype.html Maybe put a slight drop shadow on your inside "body" area where your content lives. Make it stand proud off the page a little to give some depth. Dunno how it'd look, just a thought. Lastly--I have no idea WHAT game your Clan plays. I found nothing that told me what you guys were about. If the site is only for your clan's personal use, that's fine--but if you intend for other people to search and traffic your site, you should give me some idea of who you are. <<< This advice is being passed on that someone gave me once, don't assume people will know what you're talking about. |
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Apr 18th 2003 | #100313 Report |
Member since: Mar 29th 2002 Posts: 108 |
ty malibu for the valuable info. It's not even an official clan site, i just made a secondary site for personal use and practice, and we play Tom Clancy's Raven Shield |
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