My First Layout-Edited

I took in some comments from my last post about my first layout, I tried to do what people said, and i was wondering if this is any better.please tell me any comments/suggestions/criticism. Thanks.

Original

Edited

Edited w/ no grid

*Remove the http://*

umm - I like it - I don't think the font on the "war of genesis" fits the design tho - I would put the same font as the navigation boxes have only bigger and with stuff around maybe something that suggests war - a sword or some weapon stuff....kinda like a logo
but other than that I think is ok. the grid looks ok - have you tried scanlines? - anyway it depends on the kind of content you gonna put over it...

I like the second one with the grid. But hey.......Try get yer own place and keep off Geocities !!!