Help needed -> Storyboard

Hi :D

I have to do a couple of storyboards for my two interviews with two universities in Enland. Im flying over in a couple of weeks so i really need to start them! I have an idea for one already, but i want a twist at the end. A very dramitic twist. the whole thing will be sketched on paper etc but the short film (if it was to be made) would be totally in 3D. Here's what i have:

Music: Bach - Air on a 'G' String

The camera is almost touching the ground. It's moving down a hallway, it's dark, dirty walls etc. You hear footsteps nearing (almost like marching). A few shoes come into view. The camera stops with them and a door swings open. the peaceful music gets louder. One man (two shoes) goes in. The door slams in front of the camers. A large bang (a gun bang) can be hear. The door opens again, the man comes out.

The music is one of the most important things here, it contrasts greatly with what is going on (executions). The camera will now go further down the hallway, see other doors banging and guns going off. When it reached the end of the hallway....

This is what i've been trying to think of for the last hour or so, what to write next! It would be really cool to have a great twist at the end. Like if those gunshots were not in fact gunshots at all but something else. But what is that something else?

If you have any ideas, please write them down! My brain is frying, i need to sleep. Any help is really appreciated and remember, when the CG film is made, you'll see your credit there at the end Thanks

At the last door, instead of the door being slammed in the face of the camera, the camera goes in, where it shows the man that was expected to be shooting people, actually was just pulling one of these things: http://www.blowgunsnw.com/poprefill.htm it was for a birthday party, there is cake and icecream! and pizza! hooray!!!!

haha, yeah deker... that is great.

Or... you would see kids playing this game on their console. Like an action game. And then their dad comes in and shouts at them because he can't listen to his air to g string.

Champagne...a few people getting wasted....New Years Eve.

mattboy's sounds nice. deker's noisemakers AND champagne. and try to sneak in women in g-strings, people love women in g-strings. :D

Oooh, i really like those! NL i think yours is the best, but i also like the champagne. Hmmm decisions decisions! Thanks! And if anyone else has some more suggestions, please post 'em! :D

The shoes, it turns out, belong to a room service waiter--the last room, the only one we see, shows our shoes, now waiter (as the camera pans back) carrying a bottle of champagne, which he shows to the man, who nods and looks at his bride still in veil, but wearing a corset and 'g' string--then the waiter POPS the cork!!! Where would you guys be without ME to put all these ideas together?!?