chocolate adv

[ciwecom]

hello,
here is my first artwork design, chocolate adv
so pls give me a comment, this design ok or not??
thank you
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/7176/chocolateadvuz8.gif

[tornupinside]

I like it alot, my only problem is the yellow text in the "text flower". I thinking simply making it the same size and color as the other text in the arrangement would work better.

Other than that little nit-picky thing; Very nice job!

[malcon]

look sort of busy. not bad though!

i have some advise for you whenever you add a bevel and emboss.
there is an option on the settings to change the highlight and shadow color of the bevel. whenever the highlight is left on white it tends to make whatever you are beveling look a bit plasticy. i good idea to make it a little nicer looking is to change that color to the lighter color of whatever it is that you are beveling.
keep it up!

[Wano]

Very good indeed for a first job. I really like the imagery, and I think the overall colour works well. It's kind of got a fifties feel to it, is that what you were aiming for? A nostalgic feeling?

Only problem for me is that (as tornupinside said) there might be too many different styles and colours of fonts.

[ciwecom]

ok
2nd layout
see
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7153/chocolateadvtt1.gif

[Koolstr]

Nice, but try to get the chocolates to blend in, maybe by slowly fading towars the edges. The logo doesn't go in because of the solid white bg. Render it out and then put it in. But then the colors would blend too much.....Maybe add a glow?

[funkyygraphics]

The flowing text on the second looks good but the chocolates don't quite match up with the colour of the background. Maybe play with the saturation a little bit? Good job though!

[levelup]

is really useful for me

[chrislee2482]

Nice both are very nice!!!!!

[zAiNaB]

it looks cool
very good one
but looks for childern!
nice though
:)

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