brochure comment pls

[ciwecom]

hello
here is my practise artwork the "fashion flooring" brouchure and the fashion flooring logo design, A4 size fold
so i don't know this design ok or not?
pls give me the comment..
thank youhttp://img246.imageshack.us/img246/3333/graphic1iw2.jpg
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/3684/2hj4.jpg

[*NL*]

It looks pretty good... I like the layout of it.
Though the quality of the graphics isn't so high, there are some jaggies.

The colors are pretty good, but could be a bit more striking.

[tornupinside]

It looks pretty good... I like the layout of it.


I Agree

The only real thing I don't like is the orphaned text in a few of the paragraphs. Its bad typography to leave one word hanging like that. Also the text at the top left would be more apealing if the two words that got wrapped were not wrapped down like that.

[funkyygraphics]

Looks good but it could do with a definate colour scheme. Something consistant.