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bchew007
04-06-2001, 07:40 AM
Hi, this is one of my work which I'm proud of. It's not much I think, but I'd like to know what u think about it. So what do u think?
http://www.webbdir.f2s.com/showcase/bennyart/freshparty.html
Dimebag
04-06-2001, 08:14 PM
I like the top with the yellow and orange gradient. Overall I think its pretty cool.
Overall: I think you designed it very well, and I like the gradient too.. But on second thought, I think it's messy. Maybe if you can re-arrange the glass, the notes, the windows, an the texts properly.
tornupinside
04-06-2001, 08:42 PM
actually I think being "busy" sells it taking in to account what the thing is all about....
looks pretty nice to me :)
bchew007
04-07-2001, 03:18 AM
Thanks for the comments guys! They are very useful! I'm still learning everyday...
Charm
04-08-2001, 11:38 AM
not bad. interesting color selection. i like it overall. maybe drop the brown transparent music notes. they clash with the rest of the design.
i've always wondered who made those club/show/rave posters i see plastered all over town.
*CHARM*
bchew007
04-08-2001, 02:19 PM
Thanks for the comments! I chose the bright colors to indicate happiness, because at a party you must be happy. I chose the title Fresh to indicate that the year just reached 2001 and needed to be celebrated.
I think this is my style. I love vector art, although I made it in Photoshop and not Illustrator. But I want to learn Illustrator too.
Charm
04-08-2001, 06:10 PM
i am a big fan of vector art too.
you should definitely check out Illustrator. you will love the freedom and control it gives you!
*CHARM*
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